Join OurStage to discover and listen to new music from great indie artists.
Get exposure building your fan base and selling music.
Find opportunities through our competitions.
The vocals are good , both leads and harmonies at the end.Also, that synth running throughout (I do think that could be improved by tweaking the sound and experimenting a little more) the whole song almost fills the gaps of space in this one. But the phrases are too far apart and at times a bit hard to make sense of. I got some of what he's trying to say, but some of it doesn't make sense. And unfortunately, there's no break or upbeat part to build up to,which I think this song desperately needs. More writing and possibly hiring a producer would really give this artist a chance to shine.