This is great, however I wish you dug right into the meat of it initially. The My Country Tis of Thee at the beginning made me want to turn away. Glad I kept listening though--truly meaningful.
My sister. I dug what you were saying and the poetry as a whole. The production is well done too. But I must admit I felt offended at the use of the word "japs" used so casually just to make a line rhyme. I hope you don't mind my honesty Peac Max
Comments for Rise, America, Rise
love it.
Peac
Max