Nicely recorded. Good songwriting. It could use some tightening up on the phrasing and the harmonies in the chorus. If you added a leads break after 2nd chorus and then came back again with the chorus it would open this song up and get your message out a bit stronger.
Comments for Our World
Good song, one of the better songs I have heard today...
Nicely recorded. Good songwriting. It could use some tightening up on the phrasing and the harmonies in the chorus. If you added a leads break after 2nd chorus and then came back again with the chorus it would open this song up and get your message out a bit stronger.
Great, great job on this one. The diversity in the instrumentation does wonders