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Good spaciousness in the pads, in the middle on the rain sticks, loose the strings and replace them with blade runner pads... They don't sound real and don't do a whole lot for strings, so if its gonna sound synthy you should keep the elements synthy. Loved the arp that slowly works in and becomes ever present by 2:10. You should layer a counter arp an octave lower and an octive higher. Use a dif progression to make the music sway back and forth in either direction for optimal results here. Around 3:30 hit it all with a real deep beat that just slams the mix. Loose the synth meandering around 4:25ish and beyond... Its cheesy in contrast to what you have. Do filter resonance sweeps on your arps to help remove repetition. Good luck.

excellent track! cheers from south amerca.