PlayLovesick (feat. The Poets Dance)

well you have some good advise to think over nice to see they all see the talent you have,good luck to you and your future,as for the song good tune

minor tweaking on the timing and a 2nd female vocalist to accompany you instead of the male..mega dance smash..this is it tho

i see a calmness in your voice, pretty smooth. I do think you could be a star with more practice. All the great singers out there always find ways to keep improving to be a better singer/songwriter...I think you have the same star quality as them.

Gotta agree with Tim a little too, but again there's always room for improvement.

Good track. Sounds tough even on these crappy pc speakers. Best of luck

SA

I checked out your music. Great stuff. I'd be honored if you checked out my tune, "I Don't Wanna Wait" just click the link http://www.ourstage.com/tracks/RHWBKVLJYRXM-i-dont-wanna-wait . Also, I host a writer's night in at a pretty popular music club in the Chicago area the third Wed night of every month. If you ever feel like being part of it let me know at info@michaelriser.com