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WOW your amazing i love it! i would buy that.
-Your voice has a great commercial quality -Songwriting has great potential but the arrangement needs work, it just kind of strings along because the transitions from part to part aren't distinct enough -Stick with it and study great songwriters and get paired up with a solid producer as you have the voice -Very Jason Mraz stylistically, this is good and bad because it sounds a bit too similar in some spots so be mindful of that -The song is way too long for this genre, cut it almost in half and you'll be good -The part where you repeat "I Love You" is a little much, shorten that up a bit -Do you say "My mom still takes me?", This immediately limited the song to a smaller audience of young listeners vs young adult to mid thirties range