it's good... not great but that's because of the rapping. maybe it'd be okay in a different song but it just doesn't work here. voice is beautiful though
Totally dig this song... but the rapping...didnt do anything for me.. but your voice is awesome!!! I mean I like the rapping...but with this song I feel you needed to chose one path or the other... keep the angelic voice and get a harder rock backgroung..drums, guitar...keep the deep lyrics! Overall...great song! Keep it up!
clearly you have talent, but this song goes so many directions you may lose your listeners. Maybe greater success by showcasing your wide range of abilities in different songs?
Love the phrigian mode attitude of it...IMHO it'd sound even better with a guitar solo at the end and some more heavy guitars but hey im a metal head xD
Comments for Temporary Insanity
keep it up
kudos.
Maggie