This piece is cool. The delivery could be better... Anyone could just read their poem, record it, and call it spoken word. To be blunt, there's just no 'feeling' in it.
About speaking the truth. I just noticed that today this is ranked # 20. wow. That means somebody(s) feels this home recording is better than tracks like * Sista 2 Sista by tony winner Georgia ME. * You A Armchair Revolutionary!, by Kamal Imani * My Tongue Is A Paintbrush, by international poet Johnathan Human * ALL SYSTEMS DOWN by DICARLO * 3AM TEARS Never Lonely by R&B champion Nyel It's right behind Oxygen by Broadcast Live. A fantastic poem of the highest production quality and content. As someone who has voted a couple thousand times I know what it takes to get a rank of even 20. A LOT of TIME, LISTENING and THOUGHTFUL VOTING by many listeners. No disrespect but I find it hard to believe your rank today is an honest or deserving one. I don't know if it's you or someone(s) just deciding to vote all those great tracks down and use your poem as the way to do it. Actually, your entry is not the only one extremely and visibly suspect here. Please do not consider this an attack on your character. Someone could simply be using your entry to downplay others. This just happened to be the first time I've decided to mention the 800 pound gorilla within this forum. And this particular message is aimed at those who use unscrupulous tactics to achieve false successes Whatever it may be. Haterism, cliqueism, opportunism, or just plain spite. I really pray the people who falsely vote realize everyone knows what's going on and that it's an embarrassment to us all. From what I've heard, God doesn't like liars
The poetry is cool. The message is real, But I would suggest you work on your production values Losco. Maybe a music soundtrack would add more appeal Peace.
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* Sista 2 Sista by tony winner Georgia ME.
* You A Armchair Revolutionary!, by Kamal Imani
* My Tongue Is A Paintbrush, by international poet Johnathan Human
* ALL SYSTEMS DOWN by DICARLO
* 3AM TEARS Never Lonely by R&B champion Nyel
It's right behind Oxygen by Broadcast Live. A fantastic poem of the highest production quality and content. As someone who has voted a couple thousand times I know what it takes to get a rank of even 20. A LOT of TIME, LISTENING and THOUGHTFUL VOTING by many listeners. No disrespect but I find it hard to believe your rank today is an honest or deserving one. I don't know if it's you or someone(s) just deciding to vote all those great tracks down and use your poem as the way to do it. Actually, your entry is not the only one extremely and visibly suspect here. Please do not consider this an attack on your character. Someone could simply be using your entry to downplay others. This just happened to be the first time I've decided to mention the 800 pound gorilla within this forum. And this particular message is aimed at those who use unscrupulous tactics to achieve false successes
Whatever it may be. Haterism, cliqueism, opportunism, or just plain spite. I really pray the people who falsely vote realize everyone knows what's going on and that it's an embarrassment to us all.
From what I've heard, God doesn't like liars
Peace.