The beat is really very catchy. that's the first thing that got me interested. The delivery is predictive and monotone. Would be better if you emphasized some of the words. The way you deliver it now is totally dependent on the music to be usable. The hook is nice. Could use more energy all things considered. Been listening to this a couple of months now and getting to know the track I actually like it and hope my unsolicited critique isn't unwelcome Have a great da
by Atlanta Red on November 1, 2008 at 10:17 PM EDT
The production is fantastic... smooth and easy, just enough beautiful vocals to season the track while not taking away from the main focus which is the passion, comfort and spirituality of the words. The rising pivot and calm at the end topped it off lovely and (of course) exalting Him through spoken word ALWAYS works for me!
I'm honored to grace the spoken word category with you, Lyonhart. Great, great write!
by Queen Unique on October 21, 2008 at 9:52 AM EDT
Comments for A Psalm For You
Anointed Poet
Been listening to this a couple of months now and getting to know the track
I actually like it and hope my unsolicited critique isn't unwelcome
Have a great da
Max
I'm honored to grace the spoken word category with you, Lyonhart. Great, great write!