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PlaySolution 4.0

by p.m.warner

Uploaded: February 16, 2010
Duration: 4m 44s

Comments for Solution 4.0

Portrait of TraceyLynn66
I agree with the comment below; Your vocals to match your style of music needs working on. Try to just start building on instrumental electronic style of music. Some examples for electronic like type of voices; Monoculture, A song called Silent Signals. It is not all that easy to incorporate good singing with electronic music.

Portrait of p.m.warner
Truth hurts, doesn't it? Thank you both for your comments and time. I appreciate what you have to say, especially after listening to a couple of your tracks and you both definitely know what you're talking about. Good work!

Portrait of SubtleT
I have to agree with protilius here. Your beat and main riff are just sick (sick GOOD) - with perhaps a shadow of 'Loneliness' by Tomcraft - but the vocals are in my opinion frankly, well, terrible. And there is so little mixing and mastering that the chorus is actually painful to listen to. You've got everything here to make a great track, you just haven't optimised that potential.

Portrait of Protilius Productions
You've got this amazing slamming awesome beat that just cooks a fire under my @$$... Yet, your vocalist and poor engineering at times really get in the way of me appreciating this track more

Go get yourself a hot chick and track yourself some hot and heavy story time. Then, make sure you track those vocals without pegging your meters

When you bounce your final mix, red is not good in the digital world, throw a limiter on that. Otherwise... Evil digital clipping. No one likes evil digital clipping. Except maybe my troll

Hope it helps.

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