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Pretty sloppy out of the chorus. This song has potential. Don't let less than your best performance hold back a good song. 100 takes, if that's what it takes Pay close attention to the relationship of bass and guitar hits to the drums. I'm a bass player who always lands a few miliseconds before the kick. I just can't seem to relax it right behind the kick enough. BUT I always fix it in production. Always, cuz it's important. Use a transient shaper and line all that shit up and you will see a world of difference!
Keep writing and I hope this helps.